Chris's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[LITTLE ADVENTURE FANTASY LAND]

This is an awesome game lmao

[Sonic Ring Run]

It is simple but I had fun with it anyway.

JSLegendDev responds:

Thanks for playing!

[platformer for cobalt]

I like the game but theres a few things I'd suggest to improve.

1) When you die there isn't an obvious way to restart the game without refreshing the browser. I can see in the description that you can press Enter but I didn't notice this right away. Could that be shown on screen when you lose?

2) The background is very busy and Chicken blends in to the background. Perhaps they could be a different colour so that they stand out more?

Keep it up!

[Brownie's Adventure 2 (DEMO)]

Excellent work mate! Some serious effort been put into this and it shows.

You should include a link in the description to the full version for people who want to play the rest of the game.

RichBRG responds:

Thank you mate. I really went for it this time. Of course, the best stuff is in the rest of the 70% of the game! But then I would say that wouldn't I.

Thanks again for your genius idea of having a web demo!

[The Lumlings Welcome You]

The game hasa huge amount of charm. Reminds me of Toejam and Earl on the Mega Drive :)

Few things I would change though, first thing the window is HUGE. Maybe this could be made a little smaller so its easier to play without having to zoom the browser?

Second, my mouse would always fall out of the screen when I was playing making moving around a little difficult.

Overall though I liked it. I loved the art style and music. Great first game!

[Gods of the Arena Dungeon [DEMO]]

What an awesome game

[Patter]

I like it. Its an original game concept. Don't think I've played anything like this before. Nice work!

[Add Town]

Loved it and found myself playing a lot longer than I expected I would.

[*Scrambles Your Calculator*]

I like it!

Simple game that gets quite intense. With a cool art style too!

I didn't find much purpose in using the multiplication option though. I appreciate it would help you reach the higher numbers faster however I didn't have much trouble with just hitting random numbers until my number was clsoe to to the target and then putting my thinking cap on when I'm within range.

Is there more reward for reaching the target within less steps?

[hard gaem {REALY HARD}]

I have to be honest with you I don't think this game will achieve 3 stars overall. But don't be discouraged by this, you're just a beginner. You've clearly grasped the basics and I feel like this is an improvement over your previous release, even if the camera is a little too zoomed out.

Just keep at it, be patient and your games will improve naturally with each release. I think I had about my first 10 portal entries blammed back in the day so getting something through with even a 2 is still a great milestone! Maybe you could find an artist to help you out with some graphics?